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She Made My Day
by Dwuan Washington
I woke up this morning
thinking about you.
I looked at the ceiling
I see me and you.
I walk in the hallways
I feel kind of blue.
I get a special hug
that special hug was from you.
She made my day.
When I look at you
and you look back at me,
you make me laugh
I feel so happy.
She made my day.
I asked you out on a date.
I can’t believe you said yes.
We back at home
you told me I was the best.
She checked in her back pocket
found a small note.
I asked her…
can you be my
sugary, strawberry-flavored,
banana smoothie float?
Yes was the answer.
She made my day.
May 15th, 2009 at 10:59 am
AWWW
Thats ADORABLE
May 15th, 2009 at 11:45 am
Awww This Was Kewt I Swear
May 15th, 2009 at 1:15 pm
THATS THE SWEETEST THING WE HAVE EVER READ..MORE GUYS SHOULD BE LIKE YOU…INSTEAD THERE OUT HURTING GIRLS AND BREAKING THERE HEART…BUT YOUR NOT LIKE THAT AT ALL YOU`RE MORE!!!!!!(WE MESSED UP ON THE FIRST ONE)
May 15th, 2009 at 7:19 pm
AWWWWWW THATS THE SWEETEST THING EVER
May 17th, 2009 at 6:33 pm
(didnt finish) thats the sweetest thing i have ever read……im gnna read over and over again lol until i get tired of it but that wont b 4 along time
May 18th, 2009 at 10:16 am
when you going to find out who it is?
May 18th, 2009 at 10:17 am
I wish you can teach me how to get a girl.
May 18th, 2009 at 10:19 am
awwwwwwwwwwww i love that!!!!!!!!! i want to know who is the lucky gurl????????
May 18th, 2009 at 12:33 pm
thank you for telling us……….lol
”wink”"wink”
May 18th, 2009 at 12:34 pm
for telling us who the lucky girl is………(we messed up again)
May 18th, 2009 at 12:34 pm
hahahah now i kno….u lame-o
May 19th, 2009 at 10:40 am
ooooo now i noe who its is.
dwuan noes how to talk to da laddies.
he gets it from me lol
May 20th, 2009 at 7:42 am
Aww.
More boys should be like you..
your the best..
And i hope you have that perfect girl whoever your talkiing bout in your poem…..
She’s a lucky girl..
p.s you never told me that you write poerty!
loves you!
May 20th, 2009 at 1:57 pm
I agree with justice. This peom should be the lyrics to a song. I would so make this my ring tone on my cell phone.
May 21st, 2009 at 10:40 am
wow this poem is so cute, who is the lucky girl?
May 21st, 2009 at 11:19 am
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!so sweet.
May 21st, 2009 at 2:03 pm
i like the poem myself its nice im just a ladies man thanks for the comments everybody. ily justice and kristen
May 22nd, 2009 at 6:40 am
that was the cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuttttttttttist thing i ever read in my life i wish my boyfriend said that about mee awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww she must be the luckiest gurl on this earth awwww
May 22nd, 2009 at 6:58 am
WOW I AM THINKIN OF A GIRL TOO BUT WOW NOT THAT GUD IF JUST WOW OK JUST LEAVE IT AT THAT
“PREZIDENT HA-HA”
May 22nd, 2009 at 7:51 am
That was very very very very very very very very very very good
May 22nd, 2009 at 4:44 pm
that was beautiful
i love making peoms myself
June 3rd, 2009 at 7:34 am
AWW…HUMM I NO WHO THAT SPECIAL GURL IS…
JUSTICE ?I THINK BUT YES U ARE A LADIES MAN..
EVEN THOW MOST OF THE TIME {99.99%} OF THE TIME
WE DNT GT ALONG..BUT THATS CUTE IMMA MISS ALL YALL 8TH GRADERS.
-POOH BABII WAS HERE
XOXOXOXO <3′Z YA TTYL
April 8th, 2010 at 8:37 am
AWWWWWW soooooooooo kwte